Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, videos games & other types of entertainment for children’s leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?

Nowadays both social media and traditional media outlets with increasing

violence

have penetrated young generations’ lives. Many parents start to concern about the rising

level

of ferociousness for children’s leisure will be detrimental to them.

This

essay will examine the cause

for

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of

this

occurrence happens and the solutions that the society can conduct to alleviate

this

problem. The

arising

advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status

rising

level

of

violence

which saturates youngsters’ daily lives can attribute to several factors.

Firstly

, some social media companies or publishers tend to expose the violent elements to cater for young people’s preference in order to earn a high rating for themselves.

In addition

, there are increasing number of children who can get excessive hours in accessing

internet

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the internet

and digital gadgets under their parents’

permissive

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permission

supervision. Meanwhile, the contents in

such

entertainment are often tempting and don’t require their brains to exert too much engagement. What’s more, they are still immature and cannot tell right from wrong,

hence

they are easy to be led astray by

such

misleading contents.

Therefore

, the longer time the youngsters are exposed to these elements, the more

unconscious they

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unconscious, they

will become when they face the real-life

violence

. It’s not a rare sight to see that there is an escalating of juvenile delinquencies in recent years due to the increasing scenarios of robbery, fighting and insulting elements appeared in social media. While

such

violent contents may trigger some undesirable results, society can take some measurements to tackle it. Government should take the main responsibility in regulating the entertainment market. It should set up a stringent guideline of the

level

of

violence

exposure and create an age rating system which limit the amount of

violence

accessing by youngsters.

In addition

, family

also play

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also plays

has also played

a paramount role in forming a healthy environment for young children. They should restrict their children’s time in spending with digital devices and encouraging them to participate in some outdoor games which divert their attention from social media. They should

also

educate their children to form an impression in their mind that the

violence

is

unwelcoming

. In conclusion, rising

level

of

violence

in social media will misguide youngster in forming a justice view towards the world.

Hence both

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Hence, both

government and family should shoulder the responsibility in overcoming

this

issue and ensure the children can live a

health

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healthy

healthier

life psychologically and physically.