The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The four different materials are recycled from 1982 to 2010.First of

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plastic are recycled from 1988 to 2008.The percentage of aluminium recycling increased from 1983 to 2008. The recycling rate of Glass

container

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went up in 2008.

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paper and cardboard recycling rate in 1984 was 70

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and

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suddenly went up in 1988 and in 2008 the percentage was 70

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.

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recycling

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paper and cardboard

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more than glass containers. The recycling of elastic is lower than any other material.The percentage of moulded recycling in 1988 was almost one

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,

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but with the passage of time it.

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we conclude that plastic is less recycled than any other

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. It is because

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of paper production is more than any other material.