The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The four different materials are recycled from 1982 to 2010.First of
all
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plastic are recycled from 1988 to 2008.The percentage of aluminium recycling increased from 1983 to 2008. The recycling rate of Glass
container
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went up in 2008.
Finally
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paper and cardboard recycling rate in 1984 was 70
percent
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and
then
suddenly went up in 1988 and in 2008 the percentage was 70
percent
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.
Thus
recycling
of
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paper and cardboard
are
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more than glass containers. The recycling of elastic is lower than any other material.The percentage of moulded recycling in 1988 was almost one
percent
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,
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but with the passage of time it.
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we conclude that plastic is less recycled than any other
things
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. It is because
number
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of paper production is more than any other material.

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