The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph illustrates the percentage of four different

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(paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics) which underwent the recycling process between 1982 and 2010.

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, paper and cardboard were mostly recycled

materials

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the trend was downward for these

materials

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others experienced an upward trend. Even though there were some fluctuations. It can be seen that

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and cardboard recycling standard was higher than that

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well under 70% in 1982.Followed by 5% percentage was going up in 1986 but in 1990 suddenly dropped

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65%.In

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1994) fluctuated and rose over 80%. From 1994 to 2010

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amount gradually declined and hit

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70%.Compared to other

materials

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rate was higher. In 1982, containers which were made of glass raised by 5%.

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significantly decreased (40%) in 1990.

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year the peak was,

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as it was

initially

(50%).And started continuously rising throughout the period,

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60% in 2010. It is interesting that the two remaining

materials

(aluminium cans and plastics) followed the same pattern whilst aluminium cans started being recycled in 1986(considerably less than 10%). It was clear that

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process significantly went up to 45% in 2010. Least recycling process made by plastics from binging to end of the period (under 5% to close to 10%).