Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

At present days some people try to avoid travelling by plane or train. They prefer cars in order to manage their travel freely. Motorways advantaged to help drivers to get to destinations quickly.
However
, it causes set some problems like destroying
vegetation
and help in emergency situations.
This
essay
going
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is going
goes
to present these problems and solutions for them. At
first
, let's discuss why motorways become more dangerous for journeys.
First
reason there are not enough
road
signs with appropriate speed limits. We used to see
road
signs every corner in cities, but in motorways you
can not
can not
cannot
face them frequently. So, without alarm speed
limits drivers
Accept comma addition
limits, drivers
try overtake others or add speed, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics.
Solution
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The solution
for
this
problem can be more than one.
For instance
, setting up special
road
signs about speed limits, patrol and sensors for
control
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controlling
them.
Also
, it is better to punish drivers who will try
break
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to break
the rules.
In addition
to
information
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the information
below in Motorways are not specialized to emergency situation and primary
care
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carefully
.
For example
, if drivers got into
accident
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an accident
the accident
, he would not get help minutely or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other drivers decide to help him. In fact, these problems
seems
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seem
insignificant, but
it
it is
it's
important setting up emergency equipment: petrol station. Special areas for primary care of charging or signals. At
last
, in order to build
motorways
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motorway
builders destroy
environment
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the environment
and
vegetation
. As we can observe in
road
edge not much
vegetation
. We know that
vegetation
important to avoid air pollution, so companies responsible for
road
should pay attention to environment, the same way they should avoid special
vegetation
zones with rare species of animals and plants. As I mentioned above more motorways very convenient
on the other hand
, it has the disadvantaged
such
as destroying
vegetation
. In
this
essay I
tried
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will try
to present all possible solutions hopefully in the future government will pay attention improving idea of motorways.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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