some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"Hard work always pays off". Those are the words that are a milestone for people who truly believe that they might influence on their
lifes
. a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
On the other hand
, there are others who are strongly determined in the prescribed destiny and so cold "Godwill
". Suggestion
God will
Could it depends
on peoples' age, historical events, or there are other reasons for that? Suggestion
Could it depend
Follwoing
passages will illustrate in more Suggestion
Following
detailes
some of those opinions with true confidential information
details
detailed
argumetns
.
To start with, let's take a closer look to the "a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
lifechagers
". Based on recent Harward University's research, the majority of population which
was born in 1990s is related to the group of people who takes responsibility for their life. By simply saying, they are sure that they Suggestion
the population, which
the population which
posess
the ability to influence bad situations happening with them. There could be have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill
possess
posses
numbers
of different possible reasons for Suggestion
a number
number
explanation
of Suggestion
an explanation
such
fenomena
related to the generation. any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomena
phenomenon
However
, the one which pops up out of all reasons is the amount of "world-shakes" which happened during this
period of time has forged the strong mentality of those people. The Global economical
Suggestion
economic
crisys
and an unstable situation of extreme danger or difficulty
crisis
intensed
worldwide situation between different countries forced young generation to be able to adapt to changes and modify their possessing or displaying a distinctive feature to a heightened degree
intense
intended
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
accordingly
.
On the controversary
, there are people who were patiently a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement
controversy
strugling
with all one by one coming difficulties. engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
Such
people believed that if some bad situation is happening in your life, that's what was given and we must take it with respect. Great words were said by King Solomon oneday
: "That shall pass". This
phrase clearly describes the mentality of people accepting the bad situations in their lifes
. It might be a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
also
explained by the believe in the bright future which
may come after the suffer.
To put all above in a nutshell, I pen down saying that there Accept comma addition
future, which
are
no right or wrong way of dealing with bad situations. On logical grounds, there is no compelling reason to argue that throughout the human history there were different successful people from both groups described earlier. As soon as your Suggestion
is
belive
makes you happy with your life, you do it right.any cognitive content held as true
belief
beloved
believer
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