The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

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The table shows information about 8 different species

migratory

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of migratory

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birds

those

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that

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you can see in Woodchuck Country at different times of the year. They

divided

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are divided

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by summer and winter. Bluebirds , mockingbirds, orioles and vireos

observed

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are observed

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in only summer. But just juncos observed winter.

Besides

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, cardinals,crows

also

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woodpeckers belong to both. Just as they don’t have to migrate. In fine, summer is more optimal time than winter.

Sun Apr 19 2020

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

68 words

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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