The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

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migratory

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birds

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you can see in Woodchuck Country at different times of the year. They

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by summer and winter. Bluebirds , mockingbirds, orioles and vireos

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in only summer. But just juncos observed winter.

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, cardinals,crows

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woodpeckers belong to both. Just as they don’t have to migrate. In fine, summer is more optimal time than winter.

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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the adv of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadv? Give reasons for your answer & include relevant examples.

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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?