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Some believe that teenagers experiences most happiness moments in their life while others believe that adults experience more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are various stages of
life
 that
endulge
give free rein to
indulge
 a person into
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
 and
cheerfull
being full of or promoting cheer; having or showing good spirits
cheerful
careful
 conditions. Some think that teen's experiences most
joyfull
full of or producing joy
joyful
 moments of
life
 during their gap, whereas others believe that despite of having loads of responsibilities, mature age acquires more fun. These essay
intends
Suggestion
intend
 to analyse both perspectives. I,
however
, side with the former view. The
first
 and the foremost reason, that young guys go through
happiest moments
Suggestion
the happiest moments
 in their
life
 is they are free from the worldly obligations of family and work. Nowadays, most of the people are workaholics due to which they
misses
Suggestion
miss
 the real taste of
life
. What's more, the age at which they are now
gives
Suggestion
giving
 total freedom of knowing the world, making new friends, learning from the mistakes and figuring out their obstacles.
Furthermore
, adolescents go through the college
life
 which is the most amazing and
extrovenious
 era of
ones
Suggestion
one's
life
.
In addition
 to, adults
too enjoy
Suggestion
enjoy
to enjoy
 their age even though they are
burden
Suggestion
burdened
 with some or the other liabilities. If a person is working in an office, the employees
comes
Suggestion
come
 up with gathering parties and occasions which involves dance, food and beverages and games.
Although
, grown ups exhilarate
,
Accept space
,
 there are some restrictions.
Firstly
, if an adult is married, he/she should remember not to cross the limits of
marrital
of or relating to the state of marriage
marital
 status.
Secondly
, the technological era has emerged with numerous equipments and models. So a person working in a multinational company
(
Accept space
(
MNC), it gets a huge onus for him/her
to look
Suggestion
look
 after those things,
otherwise
 they might
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 their job. In my opinion, the juveniles involve more glee and elation than the grown ups. To sum up, both the eras experiences equal euphoria, but in case of
immatures
 it gathers the most.

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