The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
A glance at the pie charts provided reveals a comparison of consumed nutrients, namely
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
in the United States. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that all three types of substances were used almost in the same proportion for breakfast.
While
sodium
and saturated fat were by far the most consumed aliments during the dinner. Looking at
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breakfast first, Americans used only 14% of
sodium
,
whereas
both saturated fat and added
sugar
made up a higher number at 16%.
However
, these products had more popularity for the lunch, accounting for 29%, 26% and 19% respectively in the same order mentioned above. With regard to snacks,
while
sodium
had the lowest number at 14%, almost three times as many people
prefered
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preferred
added
sugar
products and around 21% of saturated fat.
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can be seen during the dinner in the usage of
sodium
(43%), saturated fat (37%) and added
sugar
which had the least percentage of 23%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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