There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeated driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

Nawadays
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Nowadays
, new vehicles are added to the highways and more accidents are recorded.
Subsequestly
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Subsequently
, some politicians have argued that drivers must pass periodical driving
exersices
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
during their life,
instead
of only one test. From my point of view, I support the former
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
option
, and I will
describe why in
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describe why
my essay.
First
and foremost, No one would argue that, day after another the rate of car
crashe’s
fall or come down violently
crashes
records increase. A school of thought argued that, due to the loads of responsibilities which both men and
womens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
face
eveyday
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
,
this
may lead to a kind of disorder in their ability to fully control their vehicles.
if
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If
government repeats the driving test every 5
years
Accept comma addition
years, for
for example
,
this
will discover any driving degradation symptoms.
This
may appear as a good idea, but practically, it will add
myriad
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a myriad
the myriad
of procedures and costs to the requirements for anyone who want to drive and on traffic administration authorities to prepare more and more resources to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the required tests.
On the other hand
, the consequences of car accidents
is
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are
priceless. Drivers periodic tests the will help the society to save lives.
Moreover
, Scientists recommend to even add some analysis to the periodic tests, so that people who have driving licenses are only who can drive safely.
That is
because, early detection of problems is by all means better than firefighting of the results that may appear due to bad driving practices. In a Nutshell, periodic tests to renew the driving license will help the community to secure their roads and
therefore
the merits of periodic driving tests outweigh the demerits.
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