The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate information about the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
train
commuters and the trains
running on time
in Sydney over this
nine Correct determiner usage
these
years
.
Overall
,the number of train
users illustrate
an increasing trend in the period shown except Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
2002
and 2003 Change preposition
for 2002
years
,while
it was the
fluctuation in the Correct article usage
a
percentage
of trains
arriving on time
.
In 1995
year,Change the article
the 1995
the
exactly Correct article usage
apply
to
250 commuters utilized Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
train
transportation . From 1996 to 199 it was
rose slowly and consisted Unnecessary verb
apply
over
260 passengers . Change preposition
of over
The
Change preposition
In the
next
two years
the amount of train
commuters increased significantly and reached a peak of train
users exactly 300. In the last
years
it depicted Add a comma
,years
downward
trend and roughly 280 people Correct article usage
a downward
were
used the Unnecessary verb
apply
train
in 2004.
Turning to the trains
arriving on time
,over 90 percentage
of Replace the word
percent
trains
reached their destination on time
. But it was more decreasing on the trains
schedule despite small
upwards. In 1997 it consisted Correct article usage
the small
around
86 Change preposition
of around
percentage
and going to the 2004 year over 70 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
of Replace the word
percent
trains
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Vocabulary: Replace the words train, trains, time, years, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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