The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English house.
The graph illustrates the consumer need
of
Change preposition
for
electricity
during normal days of both cold and hot seasons in England. Whereas
, the pie chart is representing the purpose of electricity
usage
in
local residents of the same country.
Change preposition
by
Overall
, most of the electricity
is used by customers in the winters
. Fix the agreement mistake
winter
On the contrary
, it is seen that less amount of energy is consumed in summers
.
Considering the demand Fix the agreement mistake
summer
of
electric supply Change preposition
for
in
typical days during the winter season, the graph showing units of used Change preposition
on
electricity
surges 40,000
. Change preposition
by 40,000
While
on average, 30,000 to about 46,000 units of electricity
is
burnt by users in the same weather. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
This
is because of the excess usage
(exactly 52.5%) of electric heaters, both for rooms and water, along with
the usage
of ovens, kettles and washing machines, which accounts for 17.5%.
Turning to the trend of the graph in the summers, it is observed that less
units (around 10,000 to 20,000) are consumed as compared to Change the quantifier
fewer
its
consumption in cooler weather. Correct pronoun usage
their
That is
mainly because of the less usage
of purely resistive load, which usually takes a lot amount of power. Other households, such
as,
lighting, TV, vacuum cleaners, food mixtures and Remove the comma
apply
electricity
tools all accounts
Correct subject-verb agreement
account
30
% of total consumption.Change preposition
for 30
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