Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Yes, I
am completely agree
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completely agree
this
because Though,
education
is
primary form
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the primary form
a primary form
of development in our society that in all levels of
education
, learning primary skills are important than learning facts because practical learning gives our
education
a supports and helps in expressing ideas leading to solving economic issues and some
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
problems
then
they are
also
solved in economic issues. In
universities we
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universities, we
are prepared
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prepare
for an exam
level
and we all learn the subject according to books and lectures. But, provides a very less practical training
for
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in
the subject which gives importance in implementing and gets
interest
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interested
in knowing more than about it.
For instance
, in an organisation well experienced and complete
informations
a message received and understood
information
about the subject is given
preference than
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preference, then
preference then
only with the best
education
for the
level
purpose.
Secondly
, a good job gives us opportunities to express and implement ideas rather than think about it, which ultimately increases the development leading to the development of the country.Increases one's interest in science project participation, improving
school
grades
.
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.
And another example, is that we are
also
interested in other activities and learning a high
level
study
and
that is
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
University
school
grades. Suppose
,
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,
if we are going to some other place and finding a good job
,
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,
then
they
are check
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are checking
a
study
of the student in primary
school
or a university
school
. If our
study
is high
level
learning
then
we are
study
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studying
in University
level
. If our
study
is low
level
learning that means we are
study
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studying
in primary
school
grades.

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