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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on you children. Do you agree or disagree?

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Now in these days,
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computers
the computer
 became very common in all the houses, even below the middle class and poor people have computers at home. Obviously, it is easily accessible to all the children at home. Sometimes parents, now in these days when the child cry, they put on
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the computer
, run some YouTube song or movie and sometimes put on games, so that the child gets diverted and become engrossed in the game or song or movie and not to disturb them. In some cases, the discussions between children promotes them to play different games on
computer
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.
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, they are getting habituated and addicted to it. Every day and regular use of
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computers
a computer
, harm the children.
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, their physical and mental health. When they are full-time on computers, obviously will not have time and does not like to play outside.
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, no outdoor games or sports. When they don't play outdoor games, obviously, it will affect their physical health
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, behavioural problem. It is observed that, The children, who are full-time on computers tend to get irritated easily, when advises and suggestions are given to them. They don't respect the elders.
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, spoiling their carrier and becoming weak in the studies. Fourthly, sometimes they are exposed to adult sites and contents, before their adult age.
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, making them psychologically go imbalance etc. The other side of the coin is, Google, YouTube etc. Gives lots of information. They go hand in hand, whatever we want to search and learn, it will help them.
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, to conclude, it is parents who should give computers to children for a small, limited period of time only and
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 to monitor what and which sites they are surfing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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