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some people say that the Government should not put money on building theaters and sports stadium. Others say that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #government #money #theaters #sports #stadium #care #education
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government
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a government
, build
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
features
theatres
 and
sport
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stadium
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, along spend allocation
on
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of
 medical
care
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 and
education
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 is a must.
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State
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The state
, has a duty to build infrastructure, in art that manifested as building theatres; in
sport
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 that become
stadium
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.
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, it's
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government's duty
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the government's duty
 too to make a good
system
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systematic
education
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 and medical
care
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.
Budget
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state
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, use to finance all of
government
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 spending, include
build
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built
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
,
sport
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stadium
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, make medical
care
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 and
education
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 system. The
government
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budget
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state
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 was arranged to fund
state
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 expenditure in one
year
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. On that allocation, there
are
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is
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budget post
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a budget post
 that create to finance each
government
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's
program
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 to run governmental.
Ofcourse
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Of course
, in
arrange
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arranging
 the
budget
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state
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, there are priorities which
program
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 that
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state
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states
the state
 would do in that
year
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, whether build
theaters building
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a theatre building
theatre building
, sports
stadium
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 or spending money
in
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on
 medical
care
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 and
education
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. Usually, in
yearly
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the yearly government budget state
government
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budget
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state
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, medical
care
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 and
education
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 are programs that always become
priority
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a priority
, so
budget
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 post for these
two
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program
Suggestion
programs
 always budgeted. It's little different with
budget
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 for building
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
features
theatre
 and
sport
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stadium
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. These
two
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program
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programs
, usually are not yearly programs, means
government
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 not arranged
budget
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 for these
two
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program
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programs
 every
year
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.
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Government
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The government
 just arranged
budget
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 post for finance these
two
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 programs if they want to build it, or there
are
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is
 a big agenda that would
held
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hold
, like
olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
, ASEAN Games or SEA Games.
Nevertheless
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, spending for medical
care
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 and
education
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 are more important. Medical
care
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 really crucial
for
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to
 take
care
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 the
citizens
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citizens'
 health and it is a must in every
year
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, that can
manifested
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manifest
 in
alot
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a lot
 of
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program
Suggestion
programs
 like BPJS. The same with medical
care
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,
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budget
Suggestion
the budget
 for
education
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 is one of the most
importan
of great significance or value
important
importance
 in
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government
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the government budget
government budgets
budget
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. Like Indonesia's
government
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, give
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education
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an education budget portion
budget
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 portion nearly 20% of their total
budget
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. Without
education
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, our country would
left
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leave
 behind.
Education
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budget
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, in a
longterm
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long term
 has big impact for the progress of our country.

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