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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

#businesses #companies #situation
Since
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For
 few
years it
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years, it
 has been observed that small businesses started to diminish because of multinational companies taking over the industry. Multinational companies have their own advantages and disadvantages.
This
 essay will examine both merits and demerits of having them in our lives. Primarily, if we talk about
increasing
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the increasing number
number
 of multinational companies in the
market they
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market, they
 have some advantages
instead
 of small businesses. They have a huge
number
 of openings for young talent. Multinational companies being huge on
business
 level need more
number
 of people to run the work so
this
 results in more
number
 of youngsters getting a job.
This
 would decrease unemployment in the society.
Secondly
, our society
will be
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was
 aware of the new modern techniques already working in developed countries. It would be easy for everyone to learn and use new machines and strategies in running a
business
 which will help our country’s growth in future. While
on the other hand
, these companies have some disadvantages as well.
First
 and foremost is losing our culture. Multinational companies make their own
business
 culture because of which a country loses its originality. Small
business
 always works on the strategies which have been in the traditional trend since 100 of years. As a consequence, people tend to forget their culture by involving themselves in foreign
business
. According to a recent research,
new generation
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a new generation
 of India has never heard of Grandha. Now only
few villages
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a few villages
 of the country are publishing those Grandha’s and trying to survive in
this
 modern world. In conclusion, there are several advantages of having multinational companies in the market
such
 as modernization and
lot
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lots
a lot
 of job opportunities still they have some very serious disadvantages which is harming the society.

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