Mothers get free time by sending their children to nursery schools and they can utilize this time in activities like job socializing etc. nursery school also help in development of children Do you agree or disagree the statement.

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In earlier decade, the life of women

were confined

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was confined

to home as wives and mother

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The scenario has been changed that makes the way for women empowerment. There are lot a

things

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thing

exist in the present days either in online or offline for the mothers who get free time after sending their children to nursery school’s. I agree that women should engage

with

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the activities that suits them. Women who pursue

the good

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the best

job are in the situation to leave out their career after their role changed as

mother

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a mother

For instance

, if a mother can learn

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

language like Hindi, Sanskrit they will teach their children

in their own apart

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their own apart

from sending children sending to tuition

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this

point the money can be saved which is precious thing in the world for running life. Another benefit is that, if the women takes part in a community group of

specific area

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a specific area

or region that makes the ways to develop

talents

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the talents

of the individuals as well as the hidden talents which each person owes for the events of religious functions like

diwali

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Diwali

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pongal

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Pongal

etc. Before a decade back there was

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existence of joint family system where the problem has been resolved by grandparents if occur. Since the women opting for a nuclear family

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women get frustrated if

problem

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a problem

occur

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occurs

and even don’t know how to handle the situations

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If the women take part in community there can interact with the people and share the things in which the things can get resolved

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Nursery school that

develop

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develops

the way of

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, interaction with the other children that bridges the gap between the outside world and inside home characters. By concluding ,both women and children to be updated to the current market and keep them engaged at all times

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Mothers get free time by sending their children to nursery schools and they can utilize this time in activities like job socializing etc. nursery school also help in development of children Do you agree or disagree the statement.

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Parents are the best teachers Do you agree or disagree ?

Many parents these days choose to send their children studying abroad. What are the causes? Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?