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Some parents guide their children's education towards specific careers, such as in engineering, medicine, or law. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child who has this kind of parental guidance?

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Nowadays, some of parents discipline their children with the intention to make them have specific professions
such
 as engineers, medical professionals, or law professionals. There are the advantages and disadvantages for the siblings who has grown with
this
 type of
parent's perspective
Suggestion
the parent's perspective
 of education. Primarily, strict guidance of parents could give their kids better quality of life in the future. Nowadays,
global economy
Suggestion
the global economy
 has
sinked
doomed to extinction
sunk
 down and many of job positions are diminished regardless of industry and country. In
this
 pessimistic situation, parents have to make
more realistic decision
Suggestion
more realistic decisions
a more realistic decision
 than before for their
children which
Accept comma addition
children, which
 pursue them to get a profession with high salary. I have a friend who had grown up with his father's lifelong guidance of becoming a doctor. Over 20 years of hard times, He
finally succeed
Suggestion
finally succeeds
 to be graduated from the
medicine
Suggestion
medical
 college and get a doctor's license.
Thus
, he has financial ability not only make the life of his family sustainable, but
also aid
Suggestion
also aids
has also aided
 his and his wife's parents.
On the other hand
, educating children without the respect of their free will
also
 could make desperate results.
For example
, they wouldn't grow their self-deciding ability up till the level enough to live as an adult. Life in the modern society is so complex that there would be
many of moments
Suggestion
many moments
 of choice as an individual. Parents can't all make that
choices
Suggestion
choice
instead
 of their children. That's why they should make their children free to decide on their own, sometimes, when needed.
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