Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past describe some of the advantage and disadvantage of television for children?

Of the many unexplained

phenomenon

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phenomena

which continue to puzzle scientists and laymen like, the corn circles of Southern England remain one of the most mysterious. These perfect-formed circles, which, when they see from the air appear to have been inscribed with an enormous carving tool, seem to be a part of a significant message; so far,

however

, nobody managed to decipher them, and it is doubtful if anyone will ever be able to. But the main question – how the circles came to be there – is just as far

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from

being solved.

Although

several people had come forward claiming to have made the circles themselves, scientists declare that it would be impossible for even a large group to create shapes of

such

precision on so a large scale. These circles have become one of

the strong

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the strongest

arguments in support of the existence of intelligent extra-terrestrial life forms.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past describe some of the advantage and disadvantage of television for children?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative developent?

some argue that it is better to talk to friend and not family about problems. To what extent you agree or disagree.

The best way that a government can reduce the traffic congestion in cities is to provide public transport free of cost to people 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

two trends show population of suthern pacific ocean countries frome 1950and projections of 2040.one by urban/rural country, and the other is breakdown by age group.