Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that students are required to

study

many subjects, while so

me of subjects t

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some subjects

hey are not in

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interested

Therefore

, it is believed

this

situation is a waste time. I disagree because some courses are essential when finding

employment

, and some are important for students to protect themselves.

Although

some people agree that it is not necessary for students to

study

subjects which they dislike, I believe that spending time on sc

hool subjects i

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the school subjects

s important for students’

employment

This

is to say that students who attend school courses can gain knowledge lead to better

employment

opportunities.

For example

, while some students are un

willingness t

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unwilling

o learn English, English is a compulsory course in China and students are constantly told that mastering English is a gateway to high salaries. Students may feel stressed to

study

some subjects

such

as math, whereas these subjects help students to develop analytical and problem-solving skills, which regarded as essential skills in wo

rkplace.

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the workplace

That is

why these subjects can be beneficial to students’ future

employment

, even if these courses seem to be difficult for students to learn. Another reason of my view is that some subjects are crucial for students to learn how to protect themselves.

This

is because the aim of some subjects

such

is to develop students’ ability with self-de

fense.

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

For example

, achieving a black belt in karate Japan is a mandatory class for every student. Perhaps students find is not relevant to their academic

study

, but

such

training can help them to

protect t

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protect

hemselves from violence and crimes. If students do not attend these classes, they would not know how to deal with da

nger situation i

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danger situations

n their life.

Therefore

, it is necessary to

study

ese subject b

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this subject

these subjects

ecause students can handle with unforeseen by their own. In conclusion, I st

rong b

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strongly

elieve every subject is worth studying because these subjects provide students with opportunities to their

employment

prospects and help them learn keep them safety.

Mon Apr 20 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

320 words

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Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be awarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Your workplace requires an interpreter to translate from one language to another during meetings. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter recommend someone to act as an interpreter; explain why the person is qualified for that role; say how the person can be contacted.