Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that students are required to
study
many subjects, while so
me of subjects t
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some subjects
hey are not in
terests i
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interested
n.
Therefore
, it is believed
this
situation is a waste time. I disagree because some courses are essential when finding
employment
, and some are important for students to protect themselves.
Although
some people agree that it is not necessary for students to
study
subjects which they dislike, I believe that spending time on sc
hool subjects i
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the school subjects
s important for students’
employment
.
This
is to say that students who attend school courses can gain knowledge lead to better
employment
opportunities.
For example
, while some students are un
willingness t
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unwilling
o learn English, English is a compulsory course in China and students are constantly told that mastering English is a gateway to high salaries. Students may feel stressed to
study
some subjects
such
as math, whereas these subjects help students to develop analytical and problem-solving skills, which regarded as essential skills in wo
rkplace.
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the workplace
That is
why these subjects can be beneficial to students’ future
employment
, even if these courses seem to be difficult for students to learn. Another reason of my view is that some subjects are crucial for students to learn how to protect themselves.
This
is because the aim of some subjects
such
is to develop students’ ability with self-de
fense.
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
For example
, achieving a black belt in karate Japan is a mandatory class for every student. Perhaps students find is not relevant to their academic
study
, but
such
training can help them to
protect t
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protect
hemselves from violence and crimes. If students do not attend these classes, they would not know how to deal with da
nger situation i
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danger situations
n their life.
Therefore
, it is necessary to
study
th
ese subject b
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this subject
these subjects
ecause students can handle with unforeseen by their own. In conclusion, I st
rong b
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strongly
elieve every subject is worth studying because these subjects provide students with opportunities to their
employment
prospects and help them learn keep them safety.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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