Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.

Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the delay in moving to your rented apartments, which was supposed to take place in the
next
month
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refers to the speaker or writer
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.
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October. I will be travelling to Chennai because of an urgent client meeting and
also
have to train few new joiners in my company as well. I can't delay
this
task as my promotion is pending, which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
don't want to miss as
this
a great opportunity for me to grow in my career. I will be back in Hyderabad in the
first
week of November after completing all my pending work.
Hence
, I will shift in your apartments on 8th November 2019 and I have made all the arrangements as well. Hope you will understand my concerns over here.
Rega
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Masher
Mother
rds, Mazher

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