You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about one of your
driver
's bad driving skills and his rude behaviour towards the passengers. My name is Liz Jones, and the incident happened when I boarded
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number 23D from Central Park
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Station for James Circle on 23 Feb around 9:30 am in
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morning.
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the situation in more
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. As
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boarded the
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and took my seat, and
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started driving down
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31 High Street
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when suddenly he took a sharp turn and overtook a car passing by in another lane.
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was a dangerous
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manoeuvre
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, not only for the
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of the car but
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to us- passengers of the
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, as might have overturned to one side. When we
confornted
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the
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to drive responsible he
rudeily
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repiled
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to my fellow passengers. Could you please look into the matter and punish the
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as well as with the passenger. One of the fellow travellers happened to take his Employment ID, its AB3321 Thank you for your cooperation. Yours Sincerely, Liz Jones
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Incident
  • Driver's behavior
  • Attitude
  • Passenger
  • Rude
  • Manner
  • Inappropriate
  • Unprofessional
  • Responsible
  • Safety
  • Complaint
  • Apology
  • Compensation
  • Improve
  • Customer service
  • Conduct
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