The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

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Nuclear
power
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is an innovation of the modern science. It is the key source of nuclear weapons. Nuclear technology can be used for our benefits as the natural resources are limited and being exhausted every
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. It can be the most efficient alternative to fuel, electricity, and other types of
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. But yet nuclear weapons are a threat to our existence and single misuse of
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giant
power
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can destroy our civilisation. Many of the
first
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world
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countries have achieved the nuclear
power
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and have become a superpower. It can
initially
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seem that mono-polarization of nuclear
power
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preserves
world
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peace but
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peace, but
the idea is not
agreeable always
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always agreeable
. The present
world
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is not in a position where powerful countries will shout at weaker and the
peace
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will prevail. The reality is we notice lots of suicide bombing attack and the hatred; the wrath of the people is so acute that they won't even think about the existence of our civilisation. To maintain
peace
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there must be a peaceful way. Anger,
Power
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threat and domination can't keep the
peace
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in the worlds. So I disagree with the statement that
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nuclear weapons
a nuclear weapon
can maintain the
world
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peace
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and far-weight the
disadvantages but
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disadvantages, but
I do agree with the idea that nuclear
power
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can be a great source of cheap
energy
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. It is very much true that nuclear
power
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is an alternative and perhaps the most efficient source of
energy
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during these days of the
energy
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crisis. Unlike other natural resources
such
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as petroleum or gas
,
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,
it is highly effective for industrial, transportation and other purposes and it is pollution free. As it is limitless, there is no question of its being used up like other natural resources like natural gas.
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, to control the over-increasing environmental pollution we have to use
this
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technology in every applicable field. One day we all will be bound to use nuclear
power
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to continue our life when there won't be any natural gas, fuels at all.

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