Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Majority

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The majority

of people believe

art

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and

culture

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are for the

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

funding

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while others think the

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opposite, they

believe there is something beneficial for the dwellers and the

culture

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regarding to cultural activities which people benefit from

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The more people live in

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life, the more they indeed need to conduct some cultural activities in the

culture

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thus

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Thus

, the

government

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is responsible for cultural activities and

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firstly

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Firstly

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many people tend to have beneficial activities to do,

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as sport

activeites

any specific behavior

activities

and arts

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Therfore

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Therefore

, they enjoy cultural activities which all people participate

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in

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In order to take part in the country, it is essential for dwellers to enjoy the civilization and its famous activities. While some

population

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think that the

government

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funding should not be used for supporting

art

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and

culture

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due to the

avalibality

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of other important

activites

any specific behavior

activities

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there

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There

is a need for the

government

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to be responsible for something in

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era

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Less people

are concerning

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are concerned

about the

activities therfore

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activities, therefore

activities therefore

, they think it is no more good for the

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

governments

to take part in funding for supporting

culture

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and

art

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Because there are more important things to be noticed

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Althouhg

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Although

some people believe that

government

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should not take part in supporting

art

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and

culture

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other people think differently

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they think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the

population

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and the civilization in the country.

these

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These

days

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the percentage of people gaining

benefits

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the benefits

from

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of

culture

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is

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are

higher than ever before

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Because of the amount of

varity

a collection containing a variety of sorts of things

variety

of people who need activities and at the same time benefit widely from

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activities

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people

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People

who live

peacifuly

in a peaceful manner

peacefully

peaceful

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still in need to much more

activities

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activity

and taking

parts

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part

in

arts

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the arts

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those

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Those

who are rich in having information

abaout

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

about

culture

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tend to ask questions whether they need support or not

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therefore

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Therefore

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i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think the

population

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is ready to serve the

culture

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and take so many parts in

arts

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the arts

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, money is another thing to consider

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because it allows the

governemtn

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

to support the

culture

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and especially

art

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and cultural

activties

any specific behavior

activities

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The more people using

varity

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a variety

variety

of activities the more they have a chance to make the

commiunity

a group of people living in a particular local area

community

communities

happier

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in

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In

my

opinion I

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opinion, I

think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the

population

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and the

culture

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people

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People

are in love with making the community

happier

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happy

due to the changes the

government

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make

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makes

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in

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addition, by giving money to the

government

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they can establish more places that are

disgnated

assign a name or title to

designated

for leisure time and doing

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activities

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