It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is commonly believed that some people have an innate capacity, but it is argued by some that any kid can be taught to get a great sports person or a musician. While there are arguments in favour of teaching any child to get an ability, I would argue that it is better to have an innate ability. On the one hand, there are some claims that any child can get a great
talent
after have a practice with professionals. Many individuals got their abilities after having a great practice.
For instance
, they can start to teach around 3-4 years old and get some experience about their fields. İf they have an enough money and energy they can be better than others who have an innate ability.
This
way may lead them to the most professional ones without having a native
talent
.
On the other hand
, it is considered by many that some individuals are born with native abilities.
Firstly having
Accept comma addition
Firstly, having
an innate abilities is the best route to a better career.
For example
, it is impossible to be an artist without having an innate capacity. İt is clearly seems that, having a native
talent
is better,
although
any child can be taught. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that born with innate
talent
can lead to best route.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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