Topic 01. It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
However
, it isn’t impossible to have feasible solution
to that problem. Suggestion
a feasible solution
First
, all the contents must be undergone thorough censorship process before being allowed to broadcast on television or post on social media. In fact, It will lessen the contact with bad content of the juvenile, especially teenagers, which reduces the rate
of crimes in the future. Second
, if the government imposes strict and severe punishments to drug trafficking, the crime rate
of juvenile delinquency would be lower considerably
. Suggestion
considerably lower
lower considerable
lower considerable considerable
For example
, those drug dealers and buyers would be sent in
prison and stood Suggestion
to
social
isolated, which acts as deterrent for everyone in society.
In conclusion, by identifying the reasons why the juvenile crime increases continuously. In order to minimize the crime Suggestion
socially
rate
there are various measures for families, government as well as society to control the growth in the rate
of juvenile delinquency.Submitted by nguyenthuyhien.11498 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite