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The pie chart below shows percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India fom 2012 to 2017

The pie chart below shows percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India fom 2012 to 2017
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The charts below compare the proportion of
ad
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according to
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 different types of social
media
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 in the country of India in 2012 and 2017.
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, the general trend was that
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most ads had used by tv and print,
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 the least of ads
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spending
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 as mentioned by digital, outdoor, radio and cinema over a period of question. In terms of tv, in 2012, it
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 most popular for
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ad
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, utilized by 43%.
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 was followed by print usage at 38%.
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, after 2 years, the usage of tv increased only slightly by 2%.
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, print use declined significantly by 8%. It was the
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media
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ad
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.
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, charts represented by other
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un popular
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 in 2008. Radio, digital and outdoor
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 only spent by 7%, 6% and 5% respectively.
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, by 2018, digital had experienced a 15% increase in
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 spending by
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. But radio saw a slight decline
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 3%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ad, media with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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