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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

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Generally, it is accepted that, every single parent wants to pass children's free
time
 with useful work. In order to fulfil it, the vast majority of children are motivated by their parents to get a part
time
 job in their leisure
time
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • responsibility
  • punctuality
  • work ethic
  • financial literacy
  • budgeting
  • time management
  • work experience
  • career prospects
  • independence
  • self-esteem
  • communication
  • interpersonal skills
  • academic responsibilities
  • school performance
  • hobbies
  • relaxation
  • well-being
  • stress
  • fatigue
  • premature adulthood
  • childhood experiences
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