The population in most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problem does overpopulation in the cities cause? How can these problems be solved?

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The issue regarding overpopulation has been an ongoing debate since the dawn of 21

century

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centuries

Over

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Overpopulation

population

is now becom

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has now become

is now become

is now became

is now becomes

major issue

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a major issue

as people are moving from one place to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

for

better job

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better jobs

a better job

, life and other opportunities.

This

causes various problems in

urben

relating to or concerned with a city or densely populated area

urban

areas.

However

, with the help of some steps,

this

problem might be

sloved

explained or answered

solved

This

essay would discuss

this

assertation

a declaration that is made emphatically (as if no supporting evidence were necessary)

assertion

and draw a logical conclusion. To commence with, overpopulation has

plethora

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a plethora

of effect on cities as well as people.

Firstly

, it

becoms

enter or assume a certain state or condition

becomes

cause

connects a noun with the preceding word

deforestation. Government

cut

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cuts

down forests

fpr

appropriate to; intended for

for

construction of buildings as it is

primary necessity

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a primary necessity

the primary necessity

of people. Increasing

population

directly affect

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directly affects

the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

and it is

major issue

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a major issue

the major issue

Further

, cities are facing traffic problems. Most of the people

havr

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

private vehicle for commuting. Though, there are many over bridges and

roads but

Accept comma addition

roads, but

it is not in control owing to use of private vehicles for long as well as short distance

also

In addition

this

, over

population

resulted in

considerable increase

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a considerable increase

in basic needs

such

as food, housing, public services and

mny

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

more. To combat the

over

too much population

overpopulation

population

, there are adequate steps which might be helpful. Government should spread awareness

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eco-friendly campaign. In which they can aware people about

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

and give them some guidelines to protect surrounding areas like planting trees, use of public transport rather than private vehicles and

many

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much

more.

Furthermore

, government should invest money for

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

unemployment

in rural areas. They can start businesses and industries.

Thus

, people would not move to cities for finding work. To

recaptulate

summarize briefly

recapitulate

, I believe that if government take some precious steps

such

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

unemployment

, different campaign again over

population

, would definitely

decreases

Suggestion

decrease

population

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overpopulation
urbanization
strain on resources
property prices
traffic congestion
public services
healthcare
education
sanitation
unemployment rates
competition
green spaces
recreational areas
infrastructure
quality of life
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