The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrated the
rate
of birth
and death
conversion in New Zealand for over 100 years and foresees that until 2101.
Overall
, the birth
rate
was higher than the death
rate
at the beginning. Both curves experienced an upward trend and there had some significant rise until the present day. Afterward
, the Change the spelling
Afterwards
death
rate
will be increased sharply and exceeded the birth
rate
at the end
of the prediction.
In 1901, the starting point of birth
Correct article usage
the birth
rate
was nearly 20000 and remained steady growth until 1941. Between 1941-1961 it experienced a rapid surge to more than a triple, approximately by
65000 and hit the highest point over the period. There was some fluctuation in the following 20 years.
In comparison, the amount of Change preposition
apply
death
was
dramatically rose from 2001 to 2061 and outweighs the amount of Unnecessary verb
apply
birth
in 2041, almost 50000. It estimated a gradual extend
to about 60000 at Replace the word
extension
last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, birth, death with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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