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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides
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information about
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 of
waste
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 produced by
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companies A, B and C between 2000 and 2015.
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,
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company
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 A had a strong downward trend over the
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company
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 B demonstrated
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 gradual rise within the 15-years
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. At the same time,
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company
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 C reached the lowest point among all the three companies. Concerning the companies that experienced declines in the amount
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waste
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,
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company
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 A had the highest figure of the
period
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 given (12
tonnes
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) in 2000. Afterwards, it reduced the
waste
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 to around 10
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 in 2005. Its estimates constantly fell to 9
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 and about 8
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 in 2010 and 2015 respectively. Contrastingly, the amount of was of
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company
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 B rose from nearly 8
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 up to around 10
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 in the
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 between 2000 and 2005.
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, it declined to about 7
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 in 2010 and 3
tonnes
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 in 2015. Regarding the
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 that grew the number of
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tonnes
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company
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 C had a steady rise over the
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 given. It began at the point of about 4
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 in 2000 and
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, reached the number of 6
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 in 2005.
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, it grew up to around 7
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 in 2010 and had a sharp increase
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 nearly 3
tonnes
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 between 2010 and 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, waste, company, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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