Some people say that supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell. Others say it is the responsibility of the consumers to avoid such products. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some argue that supermarkets should take in charge to reduce the huge amount of packaged products they sell, while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
say that
this
is
consumers' responsibility
Suggestion
a consumers' responsibility
the consumers' responsibility
not to
use
these products.
This
essay will argue that
although
each customer
take
Suggestion
takes
an action to reduce the usage of packaged items, in my
opimion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
, it is important for supermarkets to reduce them for the
environment
. Each consumer should be aware
of not
Accept comma addition
of, not
to buy those packaged products to protect the
environment
.
One
reason why some people oppose
this
is that only
one
person
can not
can not
cannot
make any difference, but if many people start acting together, the result may
chage
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
significantly.
For instance
, in many countries, reusable shopping bags were introduced and many people began to bring them for grocery shopping since they recognized that tons of plastic bags or bottles which can not
recycled
Suggestion
recycle
are seen in the ocean or in the forest. Despite the fact that
this
is an important action among people in the world, it does not address the problem directly and would take
time
to
slove
find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of
solve
it. In order to protect the
environment
, supermarkets should minimize to produce
overwrapped
packaging. The reason why it is necessary for them is that most
consumer
Suggestion
consumers
use
those bags only
one
time
and after that they just throw away and it causes to increase
gabage
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
in the future.
For example
, in Japan, each cookie and chocolate are packed by plastic material, and some pieces are packaged in other plastic bags.
Then
they are just thrown away with only
one
time
use
.
Therefore
,
this
way is wasteful and should be avoided for the
environment
. In conclusion, even though each person should be aware of reducing the usage of packaged products, in my opinion, supermarkets should deal with reducing those packages for only
one
time
use
because it is not important for most consumers and it is
necessary action
Suggestion
a necessary action
for the long term.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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