The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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forested land in millions of

hectares

in different parts of the world.

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we have Africa and it looks

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the

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but it's still

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quite of changes, it is a bit difficult to maintain the number of

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every day and our planet as well.

Tue Apr 21 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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154 words

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