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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
table
 is about
a
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forested land in millions of
hectares
 in different parts of the world.
In
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 the beginning of the
table
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 we have Africa and it looks
throughout
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like throughout
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 the
years
 the number of
hectares
 has decreased
although
 Asia increased a bit, we have
Europe
who
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 is on top of the
table
however
 the North
America
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hectares
 changed a bit
also
 Oceania when South
America
 had a little stroke between the
years
.in 1990
Europe
 was
on
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at
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 the first of the
table
while
 South
America
 was on
the
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second
, in the meanwhile
Europe
 is still on the top
while
 South
America
 has
decreases
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 but it's still
second
 top to
Europe
. Some areas had a great inflect throughout the
years
while
 others had
a
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quite of changes, it is a bit difficult to maintain the number of
hectares
 through the
years
 because of how our world changes
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every day and our planet as well.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, hectares, years, europe, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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