The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
table
is about
a
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forested land in millions of
hectares
in different parts of the world.
In
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the beginning of the
table
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we have Africa and it looks
throughout
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like throughout
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the
years
the number of
hectares
has decreased
although
Asia increased a bit, we have
Europe
who
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which
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is on top of the
table
however
the North
America
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hectares
changed a bit
also
Oceania when South
America
had a little stroke between the
years
.in 1990
Europe
was
on
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at
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the first of the
table
while
South
America
was on
the
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second
, in the meanwhile
Europe
is still on the top
while
South
America
has
decreases
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but it's still
second
top to
Europe
. Some areas had a great inflect throughout the
years
while
others had
a
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quite of changes, it is a bit difficult to maintain the number of
hectares
through the
years
because of how our world changes
in
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every day and our planet as well.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, hectares, years, europe, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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