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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is an argue
by
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with
 some people that who have
special
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a special talent
talent
, only those people are good in
art
, but others opine that it does not need special
talent
 to seek
art
. In my opinion, anyone can learn
art
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the art
 and create
art
 with practice and hard work. On one hand, as stated by some people,
art
 can be only built by people with special qualities. They believe that only these people can be successful. To clarify, some people are god gifted and does not need any special training for that to achieve something in
art
. These people need
level
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a level
 of superiority to produce a masterpiece which is not possible by the common person.
For instance
, there is an American artist
akiane
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Akiane
asking
 who is
painter
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painted
 as well as
poet
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a poet
, and she started her artwork from childhood.
Whole world
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The whole world
A whole world
 was amazed by her
talent
.
On the other hand
, it is considered by few people that it is not mandatory that born talented people can succeed in the field of
art
, but common people can
also
 construct good artwork. It is often said that practice makes
man
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a man
 perfect. To elaborate, a person with no
talent
 can put his full effort on something and that person can
also
 master in his field.
For example
, Bollywood movie actress
katrina
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Katrina
kaif
a small restaurant where drinks and snacks are sold
cafe
 was very bad in acting before
then
 she has done various acting courses and with many years of hard work.
she
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She
 has now an ability to compete any furbished actor in Bollywood. I believe, it is not compulsory that inborn
talent
 is must, anyone can perform
good
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well
better
best
 in
art
 if one has
willingness
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a willingness
the willingness
 to learn and dedication to learn something.
Its
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It's
 good to be born talented but its in our hands to use the
talent
 and to work on it.
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