Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some people think that consuming
meat
is very dangerous to our health provided that people should only eat vegetarian food
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vegetarian
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Vegetarian
food or
meat
both
have
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has
its own pros and cons
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people
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People
cannot say which one is completely healthy. Avoiding
meat
can bring imbalance in
environment
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the environment
.I strongly believe that it is not necessary for everyone to become vegetarian
it
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It
is not
heathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
for everyone to avoid eating
meat
because of several reasons
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
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people eat
meat
so that they can get proper amount minerals like vitamin and
protein which
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protein, which
are not found in most vegetables.To explain in
dept
the extent downward or backward or inward
depth
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people
are living
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is living
in colder region required high
protine
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
protein
level in order to survive in
cold
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the cold
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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