Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important? Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people believe as a human being, having a satisfactory job can bring a happiness to them in
life
because they can earn
money
from it.
However
, other factors are essential that play a role either. I think, people
cannot
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can not
only feel delighted just because having an enjoyable
careers
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career
. In spite of
this
, mental
health
and living in a good condition are
such
a
bless
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blessed
that could make people
satisfy
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satisfied
in
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with
their
life
. Very few people want to live to work because it is the only thing that they can earn a
money
from.
In addition
, people determine to work hard and extra shifted in order to get an extra
incomes
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income
.
This
profits could provide them to purchase an expensive
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material
materials
and stuffs
such
as houses, cars and food supplies.
Consequently
, people could satisfy to live a
life
because they can afford to have a
things
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thing
what they wish for.
On the other hand
, mental
health
and healthy condition are vital in human's lives. These factors are the medicine that
money
could not buy people's happiness. People wish to have a healthy
life
without too much pressure and any serious diseases to live longer.
For instance
, if we live with
cancer so
Accept comma addition
cancer, so
how can
surrounding
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surround
people feel happy.
This
is the reason that people feel
bless
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blessed
blesses
of having a good
health
.
In addition
, living in a good condition that has stunning and natural landscapes
also
make people feel peaceful. There is no air pollution that can affect to
health
problem.
Consequently
, having a healthy land to plant a
fruits
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fruit
and vegetables that are natural resources and adapt
life
to live peacefully. These are the mainly factors that
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
survive to achieve the real peace of mind and enjoy well-being. To sum up, having a fantastic job in hand is not the only happy pill that many people wish for, but they could earn
money
in order to purchase their satisfactory products so that they feel happy with it.
Otherwise
, living in a good environment and have a healthy
life
are very important in
human being
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human beings
the human being
.
Therfore
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Therefore
, people feel cheerful, optimistic and
blessful
completely happy and contented
blissful
because they could afford both
money
and other essential factors in
life
.
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