Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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whether they should pursue

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further

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education or not.

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some feel that getting a task straight after graduating from high

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brings about a

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of advantages, I am convinced that it is better if

students

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continue studying at college Or university. -There are two justifiable reasons why some believe that

students

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can reap the benefits of Working straight after school. The first factor is gaining work experience and starting Their own business.

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,

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can learn how to be on friendly terms with

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Co-workers and cooperate with their boss, which are valuable interpersonal skills for any job. They,

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, often easily get a business off the ground. Another perceived ground is

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Reduce financial burden. Many universities or colleges charge high fees for their courses, And some

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whose parents cannot support enough money for them to keep on Studying because they are poor or in debt. In

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case, getting a job straight after school can

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them make ends meet and save money.

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, I am of the opinion that it is better to follow a

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education. In the first place, there are more prospects of finding splendid jobs if

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have a bachelor’s Degree or a doctorate

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. Over

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recent years, a wide range of employers of large

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employers companies have

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recruit

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employees having academic qualifications, so people

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the

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Have a higher chance

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recruited compared to those who have fewer or no qualifications. In the second place, having

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diploma creates more opportunities to get a promotion and Have a stable income. A case in point is that it is easier for people

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to gain

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The qualifications to become a managing director of a global company and

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generate more Income.

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, I believe that

students

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should study at university or college with a view to Guaranteeing a steady job, so they can have a well-off life and support

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themselves and Their future

family

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families

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