Your teacher asks you to write about what you do in your free time. Write about: the things you do in your free time when you do these things. Write about 40 words.

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Numerous interesting things are done in the free time, but which I like most is the reading
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and the watching movies.Reading is my one of favourite things which gives me much pleasure.In my free time I read several kinds of books, but if those are motivational and spiritual
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I enjoy it.In my
last
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day of free time I finished a spiritual
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book namely
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book, namely
"The Monk Who Sold His Ferarri" written by Robin Shorma.I enjoyed
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very much and it taught me new life changing ritual which help me to change a bad habit and way of life.Let's turn to that
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for a while.Julien Mantile who was a country famous advocate.
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, he had a lot amount of money.
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, he had a lot of properties and a pricey car.But, he did not have any peace in his mind.In he meantime, he met a monk and gone to Himalaya with the monk.
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, he learned about some spiritual aspect of life-how a man can lead a peaceful life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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