In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

"Quicker, stronger, higher!" -

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this

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This

is a moto of Olimpic Games, but how important is the strength of the

sportsmans

someone who engages in sports

sportsmen

sportsman's

? Someone

believe

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believes

that body power is a key to become a successful in a sport, while others are sure that the mental strength is more important rather than physical. Seems like both opinions

have

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has

the right to exist.

Undoubtedtly

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Undoubtedly

, if a

sportman's

someone who engages in sports

sportsman

body is capable to perform

bigger amount

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the bigger amount

of exercises, run faster or push harder in comparison with competitors, it gives him a boost at the

begining

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

of his career.

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, at the same time it can pay a bad coin to the athlete in a future.

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domination from the start could lead to relaxation in his mindset and a lack of a determination during the exercises. That aside leads to the

importancy

the quality of being important and worthy of note

importance

of a mental strength.

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The world

is overfilled with great examples when unpromising

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

at the

begining

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

of their sport career have become a world

stars

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star

in a future by

relaying

have confidence or faith in

relying

on their

goaltending

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and

hardworking

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hard working

.

This

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physical disadvantage at the

begining

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

, appeared to be an extra motivation for them and push those infants to

exersise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

harder and spend longer hours on the field or in the gym for a future glory. To put in a nutshell, I pen down that both mental and physical strengths are tremendously important for being a successful athlete.

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, you might be a less physically strong sportsman than your competitors at the start of a professional

career but

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career, but

still be able to become the greatest one with

required determination

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the required determination

to your goal and

hardwork

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hard work

.

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, it's almost impossible to conquer the top of the podium without the mental force but having the physical power.