the graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international studentsgraduating from universitiesin different Canada provinces between 2001 and 2006

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of university foreign graduates from 2001 to 2006. It is noticeable that only in Alberta there was a decline in the percentage of international graduates

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increased in other locations.

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, most

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areas had a parallel growth rate,

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an upsurge can be seen in British Columbia and New Brunswick. In 2001, Ontario had the smallest rate of 3%, but by 2006,

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proportion increased to 6%, which left the lowest position

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Alberta with just over 4%. Over a period of 5 years, New Brunswick still holds the largest percentage of foreign students graduating from Canadian universities with 7% in 2001 and 12% in 2006 respectively. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that most

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provinces had a growth rate of 3%, except Alberta,

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experienced a slight decrease from nearly 6% to just above 4%. Among these places,

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graduate proportion in British Columbia had the most significant increase of more than twofold and the

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highest is New Brunswick with around 5%.