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Space travel has made Sometimes and people think that Space tourism will be probably developed in future? Do you think Space to travel would be a positive or negative development?

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Space
travel
 is v
ital development
Suggestion
a vital development
for u
pcoming future.
Suggestion
the upcoming future
h
owever sometimes
Accept comma addition
However, sometimes
However sometimes
it can be c
onsider
Suggestion
considered
as a positive or it could be negative.i
ts
Suggestion
It's
Its
just like the two sides of one coin.i
t
Suggestion
It
can give the hope for protection a
gaints
in contact with
against
any natural c
alematies
an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
calamities
h
appen ing
an event that happens
happening
future as people can live to another plant. b
ut
Suggestion
But
that
also
 be misused by some g
roupe
any number of entities (members) considered as a unit
group
groups
of people like terrorist to d
istroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
the space s
hauttles
Suggestion
shuttle's
shuttles
shuttle
important for communication. b
ut
Suggestion
But
there i
s
Suggestion
are
 great p
ossibilites
a future prospect or potential
possibilities
for new d
evelopemt
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developed
over the few negative points. a
nd
Suggestion
And
these are f
ind
Suggestion
found
out the new planets and p
ossibility
Suggestion
the possibility
of life there. t
hat
Suggestion
That
also
 helps us to find out any new material or metal which can be the source of great energy without pollution.E
venthough
Suggestion
Even though
it helps to locate the any p
yramids
Suggestion
pyramid
approach toward e
arth so
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earth, so
our scientist can make plant to d
istroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
them. i
t
Suggestion
It
also
 helps to reduce the
travel
 time between the countries as space
travel
 is q
uit
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
faster the regular air
travel
 now a days. s
o
to a very great extent or degree
So
in my opinion space
travel
 will open the new arrow for the worlds expect few negative points.

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