Space travel has made Sometimes and people think that Space tourism will be probably developed in future? Do you think Space to travel would be a positive or negative development?

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Space

travel

is v

ital development

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a vital development

for u

pcoming future.

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the upcoming future

owever sometimes

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However, sometimes

However sometimes

it can be c

onsider

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considered

as a positive or it could be negative.i

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It's

Its

just like the two sides of one coin.i

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can give the hope for protection a

gaints

in contact with

against

any natural c

alematies

an event resulting in great loss and misfortune

calamities

appen ing

an event that happens

happening

future as people can live to another plant. b

Suggestion

But

that

also

be misused by some g

roupe

any number of entities (members) considered as a unit

group

groups

of people like terrorist to d

istroy

do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of

destroy

the space s

hauttles

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shuttle's

shuttles

shuttle

important for communication. b

Suggestion

But

there i

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are

great p

ossibilites

a future prospect or potential

possibilities

for new d

evelopemt

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developed

over the few negative points. a

Suggestion

And

these are f

ind

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found

out the new planets and p

ossibility

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the possibility

of life there. t

hat

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That

also

helps us to find out any new material or metal which can be the source of great energy without pollution.E

venthough

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Even though

it helps to locate the any p

yramids

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pyramid

approach toward e

arth so

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earth, so

our scientist can make plant to d

istroy

do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of

destroy

them. i

Suggestion

also

helps to reduce the

travel

time between the countries as space

travel

is q

uit

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

faster the regular air

travel

now a days. s

to a very great extent or degree

in my opinion space

travel

will open the new arrow for the worlds expect few negative points.

Wed Apr 22 2020

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Space travel has made Sometimes and people think that Space tourism will be probably developed in future? Do you think Space to travel would be a positive or negative development?

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