Some people say that parents should places restrictions on the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games, and encourage them to spend this time reading books instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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It has been a ubiquitous phenomenon that most children use their free

time

to play

video

games or watch

in the current society. Some people advocate that parents should allow children to read more books and restrict them from using technology products. Which approach would be the most suitable for children?

This

essay will discuss my view in detail with supporting examples. On the one hand, there is a proclivity to believe that children who watch too much

and play

video

games will have a detrimental effect. Mainly

this

is because these

shows and

video

games are easy to get addicted to them.

For instance

video

games usually design a lot of levels that allow players to spend considerable

time

to solve them, and

shows are highly entertaining, that makes children reluctant to leave.

As a result

, there would undoubtedly be a significant impact on children's physical and mental health when parents' do not set up restrictions on

video

games and

time

In addition

, one should consider that children can benefit from reading,

such

as increasing reading speed, learning more words, and developing an abundant imagination.

In other words

, the description of the story can help children to create different pictures and sounds in their minds, which can improve their creativity. Take my own story as an example: when I was a child, I like reading detective novels because the descriptions in the books were highly vivid. I would imagine myself how to crack the case if I was the detective in the book.

Therefore

such

influence would definitely have a valuable contribution to children's character training, which may even affect their future learning and career development. In conclusion, albeit limiting children's

time

and

video

games may deprive them of their fun, it would be more beneficial in their life in the long run. In my view, if parents show as a role model to turn off the

and read books with their children, they would naturally cultivate reading habits from an early age.

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