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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Schools are the basic building foundations for the learning. It imparts the best of the principles, morals, values and the ethics. I agree with the statement that youngsters should gain the knowledge about how to become
the better
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better
the best
 parents in the future
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 the school. I intend to support my opinion by the following discussion.
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 with, it would be a great idea to educate the students about an individual's
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responsibility
, towards his/her children. By acquiring the fundamental set of the right character, they can represent themselves as an example in front of their kids. Basically, all the educational institutes are the sources of the teaching a good behaviour, mannerism and etiquettes. So, by indulging into these moral values, today's youth can lead to the path of the spectacular parenthood.
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, an academic accomplishment could bring the fruitful results too. Because, nowadays, it has become an extremely important for a mother and a father, to become the literate citizens. Definitely, the establishment of an academic career in today's time can support the
next
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 generation in terms of the building a qualitative era. Which would be hard to possess, if children, these days, would remain uneducated.
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, an engineer's child would become a superior engineer, a doctor's kid, has more chances to develop his/her medical future. Overall, I would highly emphasize that the academic institutions can bring a discrete revolution among the young persons. Surely, they can learn the best practices to endeavour the ethics of the life, in their upcoming genesis.
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, the
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a central cohesive source of support and stability
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 of the nation, the youth, would turn into the great citizens.
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