sharing an inspirational story that leaves a deep impression on you.

Today I am happy to share my stories about the person who inspired me in my study and in my life.
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my cousin
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his name’s Minh. He once told me, "Success will come to people when they really try and train, even if they don't have the talents. It is you who create success for you. , no matter how many difficulties there are many ways to solve them. Don't be discouraged, don't give up because behind you always have family to support you ". My brother is now a manager. In the past, he had failed his university entrance exam 3 times, but he never gave up, he spent the whole time studying and working as a waiter to pay for his tuition. Thanks to the hard work and effort, he passed the Foreign Trade University with a high score. After graduating, he applied for a job in a foreign company, from a normal employee two years ago, now he is a manager of the company. He really gave me lots of motivation and inspiration to study. In difficult times, I always look to him for advice. He made me realize that what I'm doing really makes sense.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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