Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion

There many

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about the amount of children freedom. Some people believe that children who are allowed to have boundless liberty are more likely to become selfish individuals in the future, whereas others claim that it is vital to give to children an opportunity of making decisions on everyday matters to grow up as a self-reliant person and strong character. On the

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hand, the total freedom of children can lead to the negative consequences as

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may fail to consider the feelings and wishes of other people.

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a child

the child

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may decide that he can watch cartoons whenever he wants to and does not consider that other members of

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the family

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want to spend time in front of television. If

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a parent

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asks

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to let him watch TV,

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can throw a tantrum, and parents often allow him to do whatever he wants only to stop his crying. It may result in

child’s understanding

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a child’s understanding

the child’s understanding

that he can do what he desires and will not be punished for it. In

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future, it

often leads to growing of selfish person who does not care for others.

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, allowance to make decisions is an important part of children nurture as decision making is

vital skill

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a vital skill

to succeed in life. The ability to make decisions teaches children to take the responsibility for their actions and words. As an example, a child who decided to eat candies

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of nutritive food before long trip will get hungry faster than

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who ate normal food and will understand that he made a bad decision.

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, children who are used to make decisions from early childhood are more likely to have strong EQ. In conclusion, the opinions of how much freedom children should be given are controversial. From my point of view, parents have to control their children in their decisions as well as give them a possibility to make them.