SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT NOW WE CAN SEE FILMS ON OUR PHONES OR TABLIETS, THERE IS NO NEED TO GO TO THE CINEMA. OTHERS SAY THAT TO BE FULLY ENJOYED, FILMS NEED TO BE SEEN IN A CINEMA. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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in the past people was so exited to

going

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go

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cinema

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the cinema

and they were waiting for new films, nowadays, a lot of movies

prudct

bring forth or yield

produced

and

mabey

by chance

maybe

you don't find a

time

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for watching in

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cinema

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the cinema

a cinema

.

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.

So

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that we can see films on our phones or tablet.

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, today people are so busy, so if they want to go to the

cinema

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for all

movives

a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement

movies

, it's not real.

but

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But

insted

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of that they can use their died

time

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and enjoy with watching movie on their phone or on

tablet

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a tablet

the tablet

tablets

.

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for

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For

example, when they want

to going

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to go

to their

job

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jobs

, they can watch a film in the way in

train

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the train

or bus.

beacuse

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Because

Beacuse

we know that we expend a huge

time

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in the

trafic

the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

traffic

so

this

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is the best

isshue

prepare and issue for public distribution or sale

issue

for

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of

using and fun.

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,

we can't ignore of

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we can't ignore

the level of

wathing

the act of observing; taking a patient look

watching

waiting

movie

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a movie

in the

cinema

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and on

phone

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the phone

.

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this

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This

is so clear that

cinema

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is

fantastic espitialy

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fantastic, especially

fantastic especially

if you go there with your family or your

frinds

a person you know well and regard with affection and trust

friends

friend

.

Concequently

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Consequently

,

this

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is a nice

reson

a rational motive for a belief or action

reason

resume

for have relationship with friends and make a nice moment for us.

as

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As

an

example I

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example, I

have a friend who wants

see

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to see

the group just make

appointment

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an appointment

the appointment

appointments

in

cinema

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. In conclusion, I believe that

some times

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

we need

going

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to go

to the

cinema

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and

enjuy

derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in

enjoy

with

familly

a social unit living together

family

or our friends.

but

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But

as we are so busy

this

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times

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time

, we can't go there for all movies.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

it's better that we

orgonize

create (as an entity)

organize

organise

organizer

to use our

deid

engage in

did

dead

time

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for watching movie on

phone

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the phone

or on our tablet.