Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

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modern world, the gender discrimination in workplaces is disappearing gradually. Currently, an increasing number of women choose to serve police and military. Personally

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believe that women should be encouraged to undertake

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kind of jobs, but there is no need of an equal participation.

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and the foremost, whatever the ordinary works in our daily life or the professions involved violence and conflicts, male and female are ensured by law that they have the same equal right to

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their desirable works.

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, it is a fundamental right for women to work in police or armed force. Another objection is that

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jobs are usually thought to be too heavy and dangerous for women to do. In the recruitment process,

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, candidates are rigorously trained and selected, and those who pass the examinations are certified to capable of their positions.

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, the roles of policewomen and

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soldier should not be despised. A related criticism is that women have their own advantages than men. Undeniably, the physiological disparity leads male to be superior in physical strength, while characters of female,

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as diligence, caution and gentle determine that they are more competent than male in certain jobs. A vast body of research evidence shows that policewomen tend to use their interpersonal communication skills to ease the conflict, while male officers are more likely to use force. Obviously, solving problems in a peaceful way is always the preference. To return my original idea, I convince that

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a female

the female

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should be given enough chances to

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jobs. Considering the physiological and mental differences of different genders, it is unnecessary that

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the female share

totally the equal role with male in parallel. The best situation is that both male and female in

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fields work in close cooperation with an appropriate division.