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Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nurturing a child have always been a paramount issue in every parent's
life
.
This
 would be more
concerning
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concerned
 when children start a formal education. After
this
,
this
 question will arise that whether are educators influential in their
life
 or their father and mother? I believe that, after starting
guided
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guide
 learning the parent's influence would decrease while an increase in teachers' effect can be seen. Reasons for why schoolmasters have more effect is twofold.
First
 and for most, after enrolling
to
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in
 school, students spend most of their time in school with their tutors rather than their family.
Therefore
, teachers are whom who have more opportunity to give a direction to scholars' attitudes toward all aspects of
life
 in compared to anyone else.
In addition
 to
this
, teachers' sole responsibility is teaching while parents tend to have
great deal
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a great deal
 of other struggles beside their child.
Consequently
, they are not able to act in the same quality as teachers. As many studies have shown that if people concentrate just on one task they will act superior that focusing on multiple
duties
the specified day of the month
dates
.
Conversely
, it is believed that parents have greater impact on children because they only have to deal with their own child, while, teachers have the responsibility of
whole class
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the whole class
. But the fact is, teachers enter children's
life
 with the aim of teaching and as they are in touch with students in an educational environment, pupils would take them more seriously rather than their parents that they have
emotional relation
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emotional relations
an emotional relation
 with. It is sensible to conclude that,
although
 there is an emotional bond among parents and their children, teachers affect them more as their job is teaching and they have more time to be spent
with
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by
 pupils.
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