Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?

In these days, Most of people are becoming materialistic because of new functions in modern house

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as refrigeration and indoor laundry and other appliances too. These effects have both positive and negative effects, but I personally believe that adverse effects of these technological devices on human and

environment

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eclipsed their benefits.

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with, one of the biggest advantages of using appliance is

considerable amount

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a considerable amount

of time which they save for us. By

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I mean, these machines make people able to do

multi tasking

perform more than one task at the same time; originally of computers, now also more generally

multitasking

to complete the entire task one time which can be used for productive activities.

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, city people who are busy due to hectic work schedule are relying on

microwave

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the microwave

for preparing the meals and dishwasher to do dishes to reduce work stress.

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, the advent of these machines posse’s serious

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threats

to human body.

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, over reliance on equipments

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as washing machine, has

reduced workout

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a reduced workout

by cutting down physical movement and tends to lots of diseases

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as obesity, blood pressure.

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, one medical study pointed out that either we need to go a gym if we do not abandon machines or need to do household activities to stay healthy and fit.

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,

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environment

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the environment

is

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being

effected

acted upon; influenced

affected

due to surge in

number

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the number

of electronics in every house.

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is to say that, many people do not know the use of CRF has a fatal effect on the

environment

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, as it triggers global warming. Statistics from credible sources

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also reveals

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also reveal

that air conditional and central heaters are used in every corner of

world

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the world

a world

which is very harmful for ozone layer

on

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of

the earth. In conclusion, it

is true that number

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is true that a number

of people who own

electronics household

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electronics, household

gadget has significantly in the past few years. In spite of all benefits, I personally believe that it has more drawbacks for our life, as these products could have

serious effect

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serious effects

a serious effect

on our body and

environment

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as well.