Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?
In these days, Most of people are becoming materialistic because of new functions in modern house
such
as refrigeration and indoor laundry and other appliances too. These effects have both positive and negative effects, but I personally believe that adverse effects of these technological devices on human and environment
eclipsed their benefits.
To begin
with, one of the biggest advantages of using appliance is considerable amount
of time which they save for us. By Suggestion
a considerable amount
this
I mean, these machines make people able to do multi tasking
to complete the entire task one time which can be used for productive activities. perform more than one task at the same time; originally of computers, now also more generally
multitasking
For example
, city people who are busy due to hectic work schedule are relying on microwave
for preparing the meals and dishwasher to do dishes to reduce work stress.
Suggestion
the microwave
On the other hand
, the advent of these machines posse’s serious threat
to human body. Suggestion
threats
In other words
, over reliance on equipments such
as washing machine, has reduced workout
by cutting down physical movement and tends to lots of diseases Suggestion
a reduced workout
such
as obesity, blood pressure. For instance
, one medical study pointed out that either we need to go a gym if we do not abandon machines or need to do household activities to stay healthy and fit. Moreover
, environment
is Suggestion
the environment
also
being effected
due to surge in acted upon; influenced
affected
number
of electronics in every house. Suggestion
the number
This
is to say that, many people do not know the use of CRF has a fatal effect on the environment
, as it triggers global warming. Statistics from credible sources also reveals
that air conditional and central heaters are used in every corner of Suggestion
also reveal
world
which is very harmful for ozone layer Suggestion
the world
a world
on
the earth.
In conclusion, it Suggestion
of
is true that number
of people who own Suggestion
is true that a number
electronics household
gadget has significantly in the past few years. In spite of all benefits, I personally believe that it has more drawbacks for our life, as these products could have Accept comma addition
electronics, household
serious effect
on our body and Suggestion
serious effects
a serious effect
environment
as well.Submitted by rajdeep927 on
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