In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Universities are the most important places for studying and experiencing new things. Maybe about 30 years ago, students preferred to educate from their own country or even their own city! But, nowadays studying abroad is one the pupils’ biggest dreams. They may face some pros and cons like feeling homesick and enduring some difficult situations without their parents.

On the other hand

, they can educate from a higher ranked university and be a better person in society. In my idea, definitely there are a variety of factors affecting

this

development, but all of them depend on personal characteristics and lifestyle.

Firstly

, if I want to write about missing family and friends, I will say that it is the

first

thing happening to you. Whenever you take the ticket, you will feel that.

For instance

, when I wanted to study in another city while I was really happy I was missing my family. Feeling lonely is a part of it you may stay home all the time and can’t concentrate on your homework. So it is crucial to learn how to solve

this

problem and make friends with others and communicate with them.

Additionally

, during live abroad or far from your family you may face some difficulties like needing more money or having trouble to manage your works alone. In fact, you will learn how to save money by buying less unnecessary goods and

also

think carefully and concentrate on management of your

stuff

personnel who assist their superior in carrying out an assigned task

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Finally

, other advantages are that you can study in better college, experience some different challenges, experience more things and become a better individual for their society. To sum up, the university is considered to be an important subject. As a matter of fact, studying abroad has its

own bad

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own, bad

and good challenges and the person who is on the way will learn how to handle them with a perfect managements.

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