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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In
this
 contemporary era, shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 have become the best source of pastime activity. It is believed that most youths are spending their free time at shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
 which could bring negativity not only to themselves but
also
 to society. It certainly spread universal negativity because teenagers always comparing themselves with others, in turn, the comparison would bring negativity. Comparing themselves with other affluent society’s class would make them feel
inferiority
Suggestion
inferior
 and
thus
 bring negative emotions.
For example
, in India, shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 have been a great source of passing youths’ leisure time. For
this
 reason many of the adolescences trying to copy other’s fashion, but they forgot to check up on their economic boundaries and keep pestering their parents about the same. When
parent
Suggestion
a parent
the parent
 defies
them
Accept comma addition
them, then
then
 it eventually ended up with the inferiority complex.
Additionally
, with regard to the above-mentioned culture of materialism, many of the mental values
such
 as love, ethics, moral will be deteriorated or worse, lost when materialistic lifestyle becomes the typical social norm.
As a result
,
such
 society would be so
chaos
Suggestion
chaotic
 and cruel for both individual and communal nourishment and prosperity. It is undeniable that an average woman spends at least two hours doing the shopping while
shopaholics
Suggestion
Shopaholics
 can spend a whole day, and the trend is that they are being more and more willing to spend fewer hours at the workplace during weekdays, or students often stop reading a book and head to the nearest shopping mall if their friends ask them out. Gradually, the economy
also
 suffers due to less work being done, and the youths could slack off in their acquisition of knowledge, making the national education standard drop significantly.

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