The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

In

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contemporary era, shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

have become the best source of pastime activity. It is believed that most youths are spending their free time at shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

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which could bring negativity not only to themselves but

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to society. It certainly spread universal negativity because teenagers always comparing themselves with others, in turn, the comparison would bring negativity. Comparing themselves with other affluent society’s class would make them feel

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inferior

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bring negative emotions.

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, in India, shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

have been a great source of passing youths’ leisure time. For

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reason many of the adolescences trying to copy other’s fashion, but they forgot to check up on their economic boundaries and keep pestering their parents about the same. When

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a parent

the parent

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them, then

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it eventually ended up with the inferiority complex.

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, with regard to the above-mentioned culture of materialism, many of the mental values

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as love, ethics, moral will be deteriorated or worse, lost when materialistic lifestyle becomes the typical social norm.

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,

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society would be so

chaos

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chaotic

and cruel for both individual and communal nourishment and prosperity. It is undeniable that an average woman spends at least two hours doing the shopping while

shopaholics

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Shopaholics

can spend a whole day, and the trend is that they are being more and more willing to spend fewer hours at the workplace during weekdays, or students often stop reading a book and head to the nearest shopping mall if their friends ask them out. Gradually, the economy

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suffers due to less work being done, and the youths could slack off in their acquisition of knowledge, making the national education standard drop significantly.